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Narrative Writing Sample- Grade 6
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Narrative Writing
Grade 6 Sample
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What worked:
- There is a sense of story with a beginning, middle and end.
- The word choice is often high level - slammed, sprinted, flopped, tranquil, glistened
- Entertaining Beginning: There was a mix of sound, action and thought - the author established the setting - the pond on a hot day
- Elaborative Detail: There was plenty of elaborative detail - in the second paragraph, the author describes the setting - “Soon grey clouds filled the sky.
Boom crash bang roared the thunder. I felt cool drops of water. We stared at the bubbles then a fish flopped into the air.”
- Extended Ending: The author used a mix of memory, hope and thought.
Can you summarize this story?
This is a story about ______________.
The problem/adventure was _____________.
The problem was solved/adventure c